I love the choice of masthead, model and the background wall: lovely colour combinations with your blue and white coverlines. I showed this to a focus group for feedback and the general sense of approval was tempered by the comment that a) the girl looked witsful (and therefore it isn't right for the promotional side of the publication) and b) that the 's' in 'Prefects' shouldn't be a different colour. I see what they mean. Perhaps next time, ask your model to make eye contact with the camera and smile! How could you get round the other criticism? Grade A-
I love the choice of masthead, model and the background wall: lovely colour combinations with your blue and white coverlines. I showed this to a focus group for feedback and the general sense of approval was tempered by the comment that a) the girl looked witsful (and therefore it isn't right for the promotional side of the publication) and b) that the 's' in 'Prefects' shouldn't be a different colour. I see what they mean. Perhaps next time, ask your model to make eye contact with the camera and smile! How could you get round the other criticism? Grade A-
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